Friday, September 10, 2010

Homework: CP 1 and Honors

To complete this assignment, please submit it as a comment to this post.

Please choose a song lyric that you feel could be a poem. Lyrics can be very poetic, and I want you to REALLY think about the song you choose. The song should use poetic devices and should be appropriate. Don't just choose a song because you like it. If I do not see the poetry in the words, that will reflect in the credit you receive.

After you paste the lyrics into a comment, then please

1. Explain why you choose it
2. Be sure to say who you are

45 comments:

  1. No longer waiting
    Remove illusions
    No more complaining
    Forget confusion
    No more compassion
    Not sentimental
    I am now something
    Experimental
    I chose these lyrics because these are usually the thought that run through my mind when I am sad or mad. To me these lyrics refer to someone being lied to and or being used.
    --Deanna Boutchia

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  2. "You see the smile that's on my mouth
    It's hiding the words that don't come out
    And all of my friends who think that I'm blessed
    They don't know my head is a mess
    No, they don't know who I really am
    And they don't know what
    I've been through like you do
    And I was made for you..."
    I chose this song because i love this song and the lyrics have a lot of meaning/

    -Merry Kelly

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  3. Have You Ever Seen The Rain by Creedence Clearwater Revival

    Someone told me long ago, there's a calm before the storm.
    I know, and it's been comin' for some time.
    When it's over, so they say, it'll rain a sunny day.
    I know, shinin' down like water.

    I want to know, have you ever seen the rain?
    I want to know, have you ever seen the rain
    comin' down on a sunny day?

    Yesterday, and days before, sun is cold and rain is hard.
    I know, been that way for all my time.
    'Til forever on it goes through the circle fast and slow,
    I know, and it can't stop, I wonder.

    I want to know, have you ever seen the rain?
    I want to know, have you ever seen the rain
    comin' down on a sunny day?

    I chose these song lyrics because I feel they represent life as a whole very well. There is calm before the storm in more than just a thunderstorm, in life. Sometimes even the most comforting things can seem cold and harsh but it will always pass and there will be a new day.
    Life is a cycle and you have to take the good with the bad.

    -Pat Murphy

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  5. "you had to do it all alone
    make a living, make a home
    must have been as hard as it could be
    and when I couldn't sleep at night
    scared things wouldn't turn out right
    you would hold my hand and sing to me"-Miley Cyrus Butterfly Fly Away
    I chose this because of its rythmic pattern of AABCCB and because it reminds me of my dad- Lorilee Mayberry

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  6. You make me smile like the sun
    Fall out of bed
    Sing like a bird
    Dizzy in my head
    Spin like a record
    Crazy on a Sunday night
    You make me dance like a fool
    Forget how to breathe
    Shine like gold
    Buzz like a bee
    Just the thought of you can drive me wild
    Ohh you make me smile

    I chose these lyrics because the words are very meaningful and touching. The lyrics really do describe how someone could feel about a girl or a guy. The lyrics really speak to me which is one reason why i like them. Another reason why i chose this was because i do believe it could be a poem.
    -Coleman Barnes

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  7. " And when the broken hearted people living in the world agree. There will be an answer, let it be."-------------- This is to me somewhat of poetic to me because it is lifter upper for your feelings. so this quote from the song " Let it be " really says if theirs a problem theirs always an answer that will fix it all.------Jacob Smith cp1.

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  8. Brittni Diroma , "when your plans unravel in the sand , what would you wish for if you had one chance" . I chose those lyrics because they show sympathy & feelings like poems do .

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  9. In the end we're all just chalklines on the concrete drawn only to be washed away,
    for the time that I have been given, I am what I am.
    I think that this excerpt from the song "Never enough" by Five Finger Death Punch is poetic because its a metaphor that represents how sad life can seem to some people

    Travis Lovell

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  10. end of pasion play, crumbling away
    i'm your source of self-destruction
    veins that pump with fear, sucking darkest clear
    leading on your death's construction

    taste me you will see
    more is all you need
    dedicating to
    how i'm killing you

    come crawling faster
    obey your master
    your life burns faster
    obey your master
    master

    master of puppets i'm pulling your strings
    twisting your mind and smashing your dreams
    blinded by me, you can't see a thing
    just call my name, 'cause i'll here you scream
    master
    master
    just call my name. 'cause i'll here you scream
    master
    master

    needlework the way, never you betray
    life of death becoming clearer
    pain monopoly, ritual misery
    chop your breakfast on a mirror

    taste me you will see
    more is all you need
    dedicating to
    how i'm killing you

    come crawling faster
    obey your master
    your life burns faster
    obey your master
    master

    master of puppuets i'm pulling your strings
    twisting your mind and smashing your dreams
    blinded by me, you can't see a thing
    just call my name 'cause i'll here you scream
    master
    master
    just call my name 'cause i'll here you scream
    master
    master

    master, master, where's the dreams that i've been afer?
    master, master, you promised only lies
    laughter, laughter, all i hear or see is laughter
    laughter, laughter, laughing at my cries

    hell is worth all that, natural habitat
    just a rhyme with out a reason
    never ending maze, drift on numberded days
    now your life is out of season

    taste me you will see
    more is all your need
    dedicating to
    how i'm killing you

    come crawling faster
    obey your master
    your life burns faster
    obey your master
    master

    master of puppets i'm pulling your strings
    twisting your mind and smashing your dreams
    blinded by me you can't see a thing
    just call my name 'cause i'll hear you scream
    master
    master
    just call my name 'cuase i'll hear you scream
    master
    master


    i chose this song because, like most peotry, its a metephor for something, this song is about what happens when you do drugs, how they destroy your life and control you

    -Drew Webster

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  11. I chose the chorus lyrics to the song "Giving Up The Gun" by Vampire Weekend:

    "Your sword’s grown old and rusty
    Burnt beneath the rising sun
    It’s locked up like a trophy
    Forgetting all the things it’s done

    And though it’s been a long time
    You’re right back where you started from
    I see it in your eyes
    That now you’re giving up the gun"


    I feel the most significant poetic device present in these lyrics is metaphor, as the entire first verse is a metaphor that could symbolize the subject's deteriorating bravery or valor. The lyrics also have a simile in the third line of the first verse. The lyrics have a rhyme scheme, as well: A B C B.

    These lyrics are as poetic as they are a pleasure to listen to!

    ---
    Kyle Richard

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  12. "What have I got to do to make you love me
    What have I got to do to make you care
    What do I do when lightning strikes me
    And I wake to find that you're not there

    What do I do to make you want me
    What have I got to do to be heard
    What do I say when it's all over
    Sorry seems to be the hardest word"
    -Sorry Seems to be the Hardest Word, Elton John

    I just feel like when I write out these lyrics, they LOOK like a poem. There's the rhyme scheme, and the repetition of "What have I got to do" and "What do I do." Though this is only a piece of the song, the entire thing feels like a poem to me. As do a lot of other pieces by Elton John.

    -Marisa Kanter :]

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  13. Julianne Delos Reyes
    9/12/10
    Period F

    "You & I could be like Sonny & Cher
    honey & bears
    You & I could be like aladdin & jasmine"

    The lyrics are from a song called By Chance(You & I) by J.R.A. I chose these lyrics because it uses allusion and similes to express how the artist feels about his girlfriend. The allusion is "You and I could be like Sonny and Cher." This line is aluding to Sonny and Cher, an American pop duo in the 1960-1970's. The line that uses a simile is "You and I could be like Aladdin and Jasmine." This line is comparing Aladdin and Jasmine, from the disney movie Aladdin, to the artist and his girlfriend destined to be together.

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  14. "You're only as tall as your heart will let you be and you're only as small as the world will make you seem and when the going gets rough and you feel like you may fall. Just look on the brightside your roughly six feet tall" - nevershoutnever On the brightside

    I chose it because i think it tells everyone that the world will put you down, but if you really think in a positive way, were all powerful in our own way.

    -Julia Daly

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  15. " If there's no one beside you when your soul embarks
    Then I'll follow you into the dark."
    -I Will Follow You Into The Dark by: Death Cab For Cutie

    I chose this song lyric because it had a very strong meaning to it. The meaning that I got from the lyric was love and friendship will never fade even through separation and\or death.
    - Vanessa Tirrell - D class

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  16. Syndicate Lyrics:)
    Halfway around the world
    Lies the one thing that you want
    Buried in the ground, hundreds of miles down
    First thing that arises in your mind while you awake
    Bending you til you break
    Let me hold you now

    Baby close your eyes
    Don't open til the morning light
    Baby don't forget
    You haven't lost it all yet

    Don't know what your made of
    Til the one thing that you want
    To come in with the dawn and suddenly changes
    Monday, syndicate me, its everyone the same
    But all we've lost to the flame
    Listen to me now

    Baby close your eyes
    Don't open til the morning light
    Don't ever forget
    We haven't lost it all yet
    All we know for sure
    Is all that we are fighting for
    Baby don't forget
    We haven't lost it all yet

    Someday when this is over
    We mix it up, no answer
    For now its when I hold her
    We are closer, we are closer
    We are closer, we are closer

    Baby close your eyes
    Don't open til the morning light
    Don't ever forget
    We haven't lost it all yet
    And all we know for sure
    Is all that we are fighting for
    Baby don't forget
    We haven't lost it all yet

    We are closer
    we are closer
    (We haven't lost it all yet)
    Now we are closer
    (We haven't lost it all yet)
    We are closer
    I choose this song because it is showing that a couple is having trouble staying together and going threw a very tough time, they are trying to comfort eachothere with all they have left, and love eachother like they always will! These lyrics arelike poetry because poetry is very poetic and hearttouching and this song is doing exactly that. passionate and heartwellming!
    Logan Price

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  17. "'Cause you can't jump the track, we're like cars on a cable
    And life's like an hourglass, glued to the table"
    - Breathe (2 a.m.) Anna Nalick

    I chose this song lyric because what is says about life is very true. Comparing life to an hourglass that is always losing sand is something that is important to think about, since there is no way to get back time that has passed.
    -Allison Daley-

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  18. You're gonna go far kid

    With a thousand lies
    And a good disguise
    Hit ‘em right between the eyes
    Hit ‘em right between the eyes
    When you walk away
    Nothing more to say
    See the lightning in your eyes
    See ‘em running for their lives

    Slowly out of line
    And drifting closer in your sights
    So play it out I’m wide awake
    It’s a scene about me
    There’s something in your way
    And now someone is gonna pay
    And if you can’t get what you want
    Well it’s all because of me

    I used this part because it ryhmes uses an allitteration and some assonances
    Also when you lisen to the song the words seem to belong together in that form

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  19. Drops of Jupiter By: Train

    Now that she's back in the atmosphere
    With drops of Jupiter in her hair, hey
    She acts like summer and walks like rain
    Reminds me that there's a time to change, hey
    Since the return from her stay on the moon
    She listens like spring and she talks like June, hey, hey

    But tell me, did you sail across the sun?
    Did you make it to the Milky Way
    To see the lights all faded
    And that heaven is overrated?

    Tell me, did you fall for a shooting star?
    One without a permanent scar
    And then you missed me
    While you were looking for yourself out there?

    I chose these song lyrics because they have a very strong and touching meaning to them. They also use a lot of poetic devices.
    -Nick Romanovicz

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  20. Live your life by T.I feat Rhianna

    "You're gonna be a shinin' star
    In fancy clothes and fancy cars
    And then you'll see you're gonna go far
    'Cause everyone knows just who you are"

    "Hey, never mind what haters say
    Ignore 'em 'til they fade away
    Amazin' they ungrateful
    After all the game I gave away
    Safe to say I paved the way
    For you cats to get paid today
    You still be wastin' days away
    Now had I never saved the day
    Consider them my protégé
    Homage I think they should pay
    Instead of bein' gracious
    They violate in a major way
    I never been a hater
    Still I love 'em in a crazy way
    Some say they sold the yay'
    And know they couldn't get work on Labor Day"

    I chose this song cause it says you just got to live your life and dont worry about what other people say or think about you and becuase it could be a peom.

    -Zachary Peterson

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  21. 'And now I know why all the trees change in the fall
    I know that you were on my side even when I was wrong
    And I love you for giving me your eyes
    For staying back and watching me shine
    And I didnt know if you knew so I'm taking this chance to say
    I had the best day with you today.'
    -The Best Day by Taylor Swift

    I chose these lyrics because they have meaning and feeling just like a poem. These lyrics also have a rhyme scheme:ABCDEE.

    -Tori Carter , D class

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  22. I picked the song Til I collapse by Eminem because it is constantly using different types of poetic devices. Yo left, yo left, yo left right left
    Yo left, yo left, yo left right left
    Yo left, yo left, yo left right left
    Yo left, yo left, yo left right left

    [Verse #1:]
    Till I collapse I’m spilling these raps long as you feel em
    Till the day that I drop you'll never say that I'm not killing them
    Cause when I am not then I am stop pinning them
    And I am not hip-hop and I’m just not Eminem.
    Subliminal thoughts when I'm stop sending them women are caught in webs spin and hauk venom
    Adrenaline shots of penicillin could not get the illing to stop.
    This song uses Imagery and repetition over and over again. It also uses metaphors and similes comparing different things.
    -David Mauro

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  23. "I can't be still.
    I can't be tied.
    The only time I feel alive is
    When the wind fills my sail
    Riding on the lifelong swell.
    Let my heart take me
    Where it wants to go.
    That's the soul of a sailor."
    -Kenny Chesney
    "Soul of a Sailor"

    I chose these lyrics because they describe the way I feel perfectly. I am an avid sailor, so these lyrics really speak to me. When I was reading these lyrics after I wrote them down, I realized that they could easily be a poem that Kenny Chesney just decided to put to music. In my mind, they have such a poetic quality. The meaning behind the lyrics is really none other than describing the way that sailors-such as myself and Kenny Chesney-feel.

    (Allison Beggs-D period)

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  24. Okay, so I am not really sure if I'm doing this right, or if this is where I am suppose to post it...but I'm giving it a shot.

    I chose the song Mad World by Gary Jules. I put more than one lyric because I don't think it makes sense with only one, but it still goes together.

    "Went to school and I was very nervous
    No one knew me, no one knew me
    Hello teacher, tell me, what's my lesson?
    Look right through me, look right through me"

    I chose those lyrics for a few different reasons. One of them was because we just started school and I thought it fit well. There is also some rhyming in there, but I think the meaning of those lyrics are the most important. So, let's say it's a student starting high school. They go to school very nervous, new people and a new place. They are asking the teacher "what's my lesson?" I also think it means they are asking for guidance or direction because it says "look right through me, look right through me" meaning this student wants the teacher to see that he is nervous and wants some comfort knowing that someone understands him and he's not alone. It also doesn't even have to be a student, it could be talking about anyone, when it says "hello teacher, tell me, what's my lesson" it could be talking about a higher power, like God as the teacher. I believe that many challenges in life are also lessons in life. "tell me, what's my lesson" could mean a person is just kind of stuck in life and doesn't know what to do, so he is asking God what he needs to do next.

    I don't know if this made any sense to you at all, or if it was what you were looking for...sorry it's so long, but I do think deep!

    -Eilis M. Flaherty

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  25. Well the first frame finds her running
    But the night pushes her deep within the tunnel
    She camouflages herself in dayglo paint
    And she sings her love songs through a funnel
    And she clings to the walls like a cat who calls
    The shots for life and for death
    Wearing nothing but the make-up she uses
    To try and cover up for herself
    Well if she can't hide her sword
    She gives no terms for surrender
    'cause she's living the third world war

    She swings on a vine across the state line
    They measured the length of her skid
    She never goes back to do something she didn't
    Or undo something she did
    Smoke streams from the street
    And the night is complete
    With a long and fiery belch
    She's just another orphan annie cartoon and a raquel welch

    She rides like caesar, brandishing a whip
    On the hood of his squad car
    As the siren wails she silently sails
    Leaving footprints in the tar
    Oh she breaks with the dawn
    And by morning she's gone
    Leaving nothing but another night

    I chose these song lyrics because there are numerous examples of imagery, similes, and symbolism within the lines. I feel that the theme of the phrases is that people commit actions they know they shouldn't in order to squeeze every drop out of excitment out of life. Plus, the song has a lot of meaning to it and can tell the truth about human nature.

    Tim Elrick- D Class

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  26. Funhouse by Pink

    I dance around this empty house
    Tear us down, throw you out
    Screaming down the halls
    Spinning all around and now we fall

    Pictures framing up the past
    Your taunting smirk behind the glass
    This museum full of ash
    Once a tickle, now a rash

    This used to be a Funhouse
    But now it's full of evil clowns
    It's time to start the countdown
    I'm gonna burn it down, down, down
    I'm gonna burn it down

    This particular song could very well be a poem if you took the music out. The song is done in a rhyme pattern. The artist Pink is comparing her life growing up to an empty house. This Poem is a big metaphor, which something poets usually do in there poems.

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  27. I can hear the sounds of the city
    Sunrise and set are the same to me
    A hesitating pulse is good company
    And my reflection offers no apology
    But who said that I wasn't right?
    And I've lived for years without a life
    Don't have a soul on my side
    Still ridiculed despite how hard that I have tried

    Close yet far
    Drop me a line and tell me how the hell you are
    And I'll tip my hat to those who can't believe it's me
    Though I never never never ever wanted this to be

    Close yet far by CKY
    I choose this song because its about a guy who no one knows the real him and every one is surprised when he acts differently one day. This can relate to me alot.
    -Kory A. Sylvia

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  28. “I watched from a distance as you made life your own. every sky was your own kind of blue and I wanted to know how that would feel and you made it so real. you showed me something that I couldn’t see you opened my eyes and made my believe. you lift my feet off the ground you spin me around you make me crazier”
    Crazier by Taylor Swift
    I chose this song because almost every line had some aspect of imagery. Also I liked the positive message of how someone changed her life for the better. The theme reminded me of a poem.

    -Kristen Eckman

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  29. Looking for something I've never seen
    Alone and I'm in between
    The place that I'm from and
    The place that I'm in
    A city I've never been
    I found a friend or should I say foe
    Said there's a few things you should know
    We don't want you to see
    We come and we go
    Here today, gone tomorrow

    Were only taking turns
    Holding this world
    It's how it's always been
    When you're older, you will understand

    i chose these lyrics because they show that eventually all things will change or end and we cannot stop that. each life or relationship will end and although we might make a imprint in someone elses life we will most likely not make a difference in the world. it also shows that the older you become the more you know and the more you experience.

    -holly sessler

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  30. "black bird singing in the dead of night
    take these broken wings and learn to fly
    all your life
    you were only waiting for this momnent to arise

    blackbird singing in the dead of night
    take these sunken eyes and learn to see
    all your life
    you were only waiting for this moment to be free

    blackbird fly, blackbird fly
    into the light of the dark black night

    blackbird fly, black bird fly
    into the light of the dark black night

    blackbird singing in the dead of night
    take these broken wings and learn to fly
    all your life

    you were only waiting for this moment to arise
    you were only waiting for this moment to arise
    you were only waiting for this moment to arise"

    The song i chose is Blackbird by The Beatles. I chose this song because for one it was very poetic, beautiful, and filled with wonderous emotion. Also it showed the beauty of nature through the eyes of a mere little blackbird. Another reason is that it shows with a little help, anyone can accomplish anything in the world; for example a baby blackbird learning to fly and see. There was also rhyme scheme in verses 1 and 2: A B C B. And finally, I really like The Beatles and in my opition they are one of the greatest bands.

    -Andrew Buley

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  31. "Can we pretend that airplanes
    In the night sky
    Are like shooting stars
    I could really use a wish right now wish right now, wish right now"
    Airplanes-B.o.B
    I chose this song because it could be a poem. I contains similies and anaologies. It also has a deeper meaning than it appears.
    -Jesse Parks

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  32. With every passing moment
    Thoughts of you run through my head
    Every time that I'm near you
    I realize that you're heaven sent, baby

    I think you're truly something special
    Just what my dreams are really made of
    Let's stay together, you and me boy
    There's no one like you around
    Oh baby

    I chose this song because it describes how i feel about someone. it brings feelings back that i thought i got over. It uses a hyperbole when it saays "i realize that your heaven sent, baby".

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  33. Space Bound by Eminem

    I'm a space-bound rocketship and your heart's the moon
    And I'm aimin' right at you
    Right at you
    250,000 miles on a clear night in June
    And I'm aimin' right at you
    Right at you, Right at you

    I chose this verse from this song for a couple of reasons. One it's a good song. Two, because its like a poem. It rhymes and it uses metaphors. He's comparing himself to a rocket and the girl he likes to the moon.

    Tim Faucett

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  34. Eminem-Stan
    see I'm just like you in a way
    I never knew my father neither;
    he used to always cheat on my mom and beat her
    I can relate to what you're saying in your songs
    so when I have a shitty day, I drift away and put 'em on
    cause I don't really got shit else so that shit helps when I'm depressed
    I even got a tattoo of your name across the chest
    Sometimes I even cut myself to see how much it bleeds
    It's like adrenaline, the pain is such a sudden rush for me
    See everything you say is real, and I respect you cause you tell it
    My girlfriend's jealous cause I talk about you 24/7
    But she don't know you like I know you Slim, no one does
    She don't know what it was like for people like us growin up
    You gotta call me man, I'll be the biggest fan you'll ever lose
    Sincerely yours, Stan -- P.S.
    We should be together too.
    I chose this song because it is the only song that reallu shows a differnt side of eminem. it shows that it isnt all that great to be famous. it also has a lot of poetic devices.

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  35. wonderwall-oasis

    Today is gonna be the day
    That they're gonna throw it back to you
    By now you should've somehow
    Realized what you gotta do
    I don't believe that anybody
    Feels the way I do about you now

    Backbeat the word was on the street
    That the fire in your heart is out
    I'm sure you've heard it all before
    But you never really had a doubt
    I don't believe that anybody feels
    The way I do about you now

    And all the roads we have to walk along are winding
    And all the lights that lead us there are blinding
    There are many things that I would
    Like to say to you
    I don't know how

    Because maybe
    You're gonna be the one who saves me
    And after all
    You're my wonderwall


    i chose these lyrics because they are very meaningful.he puts what he wants to say in a differant way and he really shows how he feels..similar to poetry.also,instead of saying something like.."its going to be hard to get to where we want" he says.."And all the roads we have to walk along are winding
    And all the lights that lead us there are blinding"

    -paige rossi

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  36. Shadow of the day - linkin park

    I close both locks below the window
    I close both blinds and turn away

    Sometimes solutions aren't so simple
    Sometimes good bye's the only way

    [Chorus]
    And the sun will set for you
    The sun will set for you

    And the shadow of the day
    Will embrace the world in grey

    And the sun will set for you
    [End Chorus]

    In cards and flowers on your window
    Your friends all plead for you to stay

    Sometimes beginnings aren't so simple
    Sometimes good bye's the only way

    I chose this song because it is packed with tons of imagery, similes, metaphors, and symbolism. It could very easily be made into a poem.

    - Caelon Smith

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  37. "Step by step, heart to heart, left right left
    We all fall down like toy soldiers
    Bit by bit, torn apart, we never win
    But the battle wages on for toy soldiers"
    -Like Toy Soldiers by Eminem

    I chose this song because it has a lot of symbolism in it. It basically says that no matter how much people fight they don't gain anything but they lose a lot. They fight over and over again and nothing comes out of it but they keep going and slowly things get worse and worse for them. Don't take this wrong though, I'm not a violent or depressed person I just really like Eminem and I think that this song has a lot of meaning to it that's hard to explain

    -Sienna Condon

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  38. They Tell you where you need to go
    Tell you when you need to leave
    They Tell you what you need to know
    Tell you who you need to be
    But everything inside you know
    There's more than what you've heard

    i chose these song lyrics because its really true about growing up .

    -Kayla Klim

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  39. My friends just can't understand this new me,
    That's understandable man, but just think how bananas you'd be,
    You'd be an animal too, if you were trapped in this fame and caged in it like a zoo.

    i chose these lyrics because it could be a poem because it rhymes and shows a poetic divice such as a simile. eminem is saying he feels traped in a cage because the music he was producing wasnt getting the fame it used to

    -nick eaton

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  40. "While we're on the subject, could we change the subject now?
    I was knocking on your ear but you were always out.
    Looking towards the future, we were begging for the past,
    Well we knew we had the good things but those never seemed to last." -Modest Mouse

    I chose these lyrics from the song "Missed the Boat" by Modest Mouse for a couple of reasons. For one thing, though written down it doesn't appear so, they contain the rhyme scheme: AABB. Also, in the second line, a metaphor comparing an ear with a door was used. These lyrics even hold a deeper meaning, if you interpret them properly. Therefore, taking all of this into consideration, I feel that these lyrics could be considered poetic.

    -Eric Pereira

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  41. Rise up this mornin',
    Smiled with the risin' sun,
    Three little birds
    Pitch by my doorstep
    Singin' sweet songs
    Of melodies pure and true,
    Sayin', ("This is my message to you-ou-ou:")

    Singin': "Don't worry 'bout a thing,
    'Cause every little thing gonna be all right."

    I chose these lyrics because of the poetic devices in this like personification, imagery, rhyming, and similes. Also, the mood of these lyrics are very happy and upbeat. Another thing that would make these lyrics a great poem is how he describes how he lives and thinks.
    -Mike Mele

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  42. Well i started out down i dirty road
    STarted out all alone
    The sun went down as it crossed the hill
    The town lit up, the world got still

    I'm learning to fly but i ain't got wings
    Coming down is the hardest thing

    Well the good old days may not return
    The rock might melt and the sea may burn

    I'm learning to fly but i ain't got wings
    Coming down is the hardest thing

    Well, some say life will beat you down
    Break your heart ,steal your crown
    So i've started out for God knows where
    I guess i'll know when i get there

    I'm learning to fly around the clouds
    What comes up must come down

    I'm learning to fly but i ain't got wings
    Coming down is the hardest thing
    I'm learning to fly around the clouds
    What comes up must come down

    i'm learning to fly
    I'm learning to fly

    -Tom Petty's "learning to fly"

    -I chose these lyrics because of how meaningful they are. I love how the song says that if certain things are ment to happen, they will happen.I feel that this song would be a very meaningful poem.

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  43. "Love of mine some day you will die
    But I'll be close behind
    I'll follow you into the dark

    No blinding light or tunnels to gates of white
    Just our hands clasped so tight
    Waiting for the hint of a spark
    If Heaven and Hell decide
    That they both are satisfied
    Illuminate the NOs on their vacancy signs

    If there's no one beside you
    When your soul embarks
    Then I'll follow you into the dark"
    -I Will Follow You Into The Dark
    By: Death Cab For Cutie

    I chose these lyrics to be considered poetic for a few reasons.One reason is that the lyrics are set up with stanzas just like a poem would be. Another reason is in some sections of the lyrics there is a rhyme scheme like "If there is no one beside you when you soul embarks. Then I'll follow you into the dark." Also there is a metaphor in these lyrics. The metaphor is that Heaven and Hell are just like hotels and when they dont have any space left there is no where for you to go. Lastly, I chose these lyrics to be poetic because there is meaning to these lyrics. The meaning to these lyrics is that the bonds of friendship and love can never be split apart even through long spearation or death.

    -Vanessa Tirrell Period D

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  44. 'And now I know why all the trees change in the fall
    I know that you were on my side even when I was wrong
    And I love you for giving me your eyes
    For staying back and watching me shine
    And I didnt know if you knew so I'm taking this chance to say
    I had the best day with you today.'
    -The Best Day by Taylor Swift


    I chose these lyrics because they have a meaning and feelings just like a poem. A poetic device these lyrics use is a rhyme scheme:ABCDEFF. These lyrics also have a deeper meaning about why the leaves change. The artist is saying how she's changing and growing up and now she knows more. Many poems are about something more than is written and you have to figure out the meaning to really understand what the writer is trying to say.

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  45. Half my life
    is in books' written pages
    Lived and learned from fools and
    from sages
    You know it's true
    All the things come back to you

    Sing with me, sing for the year
    Sing for the laughter, sing for the tears
    Sing with me, if it's just for today
    Maybe tomorrow, the good lord will take you away

    Aerosmith's "Dream On"

    -I Chose these lyrics because of how much they say about ny life.Everybody learn from doing smart things "sages" and by doing dumb things "fools". We all know that times get tough but you got to "sing through the tears" this one part in itself could be a poem.

    Nick Murphy

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